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  1. Leon
    This is my personal opinion so don't take offense in any way.
    The beginning of the story was nice to read and had some mystery to it because of the magic.
    But now it's about politics and side characters. The Mc doesn't use all his resources efficiently despite having an ai, like using his money or threatening the government with Gaia os.
    The writing style is OK but in some chapters very boring as it's only an explanation of how he builds or creates things. Dunno if the author just wants to flex his knowledge or just waste our time as it doesn't have any relevance to the story itself and it's not in depth enough to truly learn something important.
    The character is just some standard character. Nice to his family and friends, naive and an idiot and genius at the same time. He majored in engeneering I guess but discusses with his ai how to run an enterprise out of nothing. While he does have a better brain the knowledge just appeared.
    Few trustworthy friends, family and employees around him.
    The world background seems to be normal  world around 2013.
    It's readable but at some point it gets boring as only side characters are mentioned. Mc doing a random task like stealing knowledge.
    So final evaluation : the Mc is stupid and naive despite having a far better brain.
    Author writes too much useless stuff like those explanations and mentions those side characters too often.
    To be honest I expected more action with cyborgs or Hacking.
  1. Leon
    DantesinfernormR review The Invincible Full-Moon System
    After reading many werewolves and/or system novels, I decided to give this one as my first review. I've read most of the existing reviews and decided to give my 2 cents.

    Writing: Yeah, I can see why some people dislike it. The writing at the beginning does justify the negative reviews. I personally didn't mind it as much since I (slowly) skimmed through it. It got better for the later chapters and I can see the author's effort to improve. Regardless, the writing is nothing stellar but not horrible either (for the later parts that is). The use of onomatopoeias is pretty excessive for my liking personally but I understand the author's intention for the tone of the novel to be much more casual. After some amount of re-reading, it certainly has somewhat grown on me.  

    Plot: I think the story is fantastic. It doesn't have a strong start (after the main character got the system). I did not enjoy the school setting very much, but that's just my personal taste. However, things get increasingly more enjoyable as the story advances further. I really like the psychological mind games between the protagonist and the antagonists here, albeit sometimes it gets slightly dragged out a bit. Also, I would love to see some hints or appearances of the werewolf who killed his parents since it was the main antagonist after all.

    Characters: The main character is the reason why I'm in love with this novel. Sure, he's certainly not the brightest sometimes, but I love everything else about him. Unlike most MCs I came across, he's not some ordinary high school twink who suddenly found supernatural powers. Even before the appearance of the system, the dude was an absolute menace, being in the military force against supernaturals as a normal human. He's very cunning and ruthless, which is extremely fitting for a werewolf. Other than the MC, the females are quite lacking. Harem is not my cup of tea so I'm glad that this one is not too overbearing.

    World building: The setting is pretty good. The world building is not heavy as it adds bits and pieces as the story goes on through the MC's missions. I really like the war-like atmosphere with a magi-tech world.

    Overall, while it is not the best, it is certainly very enjoyable. I am currently and will continue to purchase privileged chapters and support the author.

    PS: If you are dissapointed with this novel, I HIGHLY suggest "The Harvester"
  1. Leon
    Jose6501 review Dawn Sleep
    Well I recommend The Legendary Mechanic. It's also a game novel, the mc entered the game and time travelled. Pretty great my top rec on this game genre.
    Then there's Supremacy Games, Overgeared, reincarnation of the strongest sword god(closest probably to this novel, but shtty quality). Pretty much all the popular ones. Though I mostly rec TLM.
  1. Leon
    his mc is biased towards some people close to him, even meddling in selecting gods and eliminating people he doesn't like
    I suggest you to stop if you don't want to see a Creator who doesn't act like a god, I mean he still has emotions unlike a god in general who is cold and look down on the world
  1. Leon
    Miles Salome review The Supreme Uprising
    First of all the picture is misleading...he is not an archer, he's a martial artist. The naming sense is terrible, and there are a lot of inconsistencies like one moment the enemy is a 2nd class martial master then at the next chapter he's become a 1st class. I mean come on. It's so confusing that I got tired oF it so I just skimmed thru a lot. Full of Chinese cliche. The mc is ruthless but he's always underestimated even if everybody knows that he's op just for the sake of bullshit. It's good if you're just starting to read novels. Whats with the Chinese always 'splitting',burning,defying heaven? If the heavens could just reply back it would say 'you Chinese fcks better get circumsised first before talking about splitting me.
  1. Leon
    Darth_Evolution898 review Mutagen
    DISCLAIMER: I only made it to around chapter 20, the review is based on those chapters.

    Oh boy.
    This novel is absolutely horrendous.
    To start of, writing quality is a dumpster fire, there are tons of plot holes and inconsistencies which you cover up by saying,

    ‘Mc who has no real life experience and only stayed home watching anime until the story started made a backup plan to the ****ty plan he made in the first place’

    for example, him letting the other gangsters run away and *past* the zombies the Mc attracted w/ his gunshot instead of back into the theater. What was the backup plan anyway?

    Something along the lines of ‘he had a backup plan for that anyway’ just doesn’t cut it.

    And don’t even get me started on him not destroying his wrist with his shotgun. He shot it ONE HANDED. a SHOTGUN. instead this kid who happened to be the Mc has pinpoint Accuracy and insane logical thinking.

    Now, the side characters. Ignoring that for some reason they’re all female except the poor shop  workout without a name, it feels like even the ‘fleshed out’ ones are just cardboard cutouts. And why did you think TWO chapters of FILLER BACKSTORY would be a good idea? Nobody cares about this character and wasting time isn’t gonna help.



    And please nobody even say something like ‘hmph, you are simply low iq without patience, the novel gets better you absolute cabbage..’ I don’t care if it gets better, the beginning is what hooks your reader.

    I’m not wasting more time reading more of this poor excuse for a novel.