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it is another cliche novel
FL finance will betray with her sister then meet a driver and get married for immediate cure (from her sister plot) after using ML she will fly to overseas become pregnant and come back to look for driver ML (as her child want dad)
pretty much after solving all misunderstanding and face slapping they will live happily with their child
I still don't understand why she would run away tho.
she would have just told the ML when she was pregnant and had a happy family.
forgot to mention ML is not driver but a big business man only our FL will misunderstand as driver
I had read this a while back a few years ago, honestly its just an entertaining read as long as you skip all the gaming parts. The author didn't even try to make it make sense yet it takes up like 30% of the story if not more. Quite a few parts were exaggerated but u just gotta ignore that sh*t, ultimately its a romance and thats what u read it for, just skip all the other parts and its pretty nice.
After reading many werewolves and/or system novels, I decided to give this one as my first review. I've read most of the existing reviews and decided to give my 2 cents.
Writing: Yeah, I can see why some people dislike it. The writing at the beginning does justify the negative reviews. I personally didn't mind it as much since I (slowly) skimmed through it. It got better for the later chapters and I can see the author's effort to improve. Regardless, the writing is nothing stellar but not horrible either (for the later parts that is). The use of onomatopoeias is pretty excessive for my liking personally but I understand the author's intention for the tone of the novel to be much more casual. After some amount of re-reading, it certainly has somewhat grown on me.
Plot: I think the story is fantastic. It doesn't have a strong start (after the main character got the system). I did not enjoy the school setting very much, but that's just my personal taste. However, things get increasingly more enjoyable as the story advances further. I really like the psychological mind games between the protagonist and the antagonists here, albeit sometimes it gets slightly dragged out a bit. Also, I would love to see some hints or appearances of the werewolf who killed his parents since it was the main antagonist after all.
Characters: The main character is the reason why I'm in love with this novel. Sure, he's certainly not the brightest sometimes, but I love everything else about him. Unlike most MCs I came across, he's not some ordinary high school twink who suddenly found supernatural powers. Even before the appearance of the system, the dude was an absolute menace, being in the military force against supernaturals as a normal human. He's very cunning and ruthless, which is extremely fitting for a werewolf. Other than the MC, the females are quite lacking. Harem is not my cup of tea so I'm glad that this one is not too overbearing.
World building: The setting is pretty good. The world building is not heavy as it adds bits and pieces as the story goes on through the MC's missions. I really like the war-like atmosphere with a magi-tech world.
Overall, while it is not the best, it is certainly very enjoyable. I am currently and will continue to purchase privileged chapters and support the author.
PS: If you are dissapointed with this novel, I HIGHLY suggest "The Harvester"
This is my personal opinion so don't take offense in any way.
The beginning of the story was nice to read and had some mystery to it because of the magic.
But now it's about politics and side characters. The Mc doesn't use all his resources efficiently despite having an ai, like using his money or threatening the government with Gaia os.
The writing style is OK but in some chapters very boring as it's only an explanation of how he builds or creates things. Dunno if the author just wants to flex his knowledge or just waste our time as it doesn't have any relevance to the story itself and it's not in depth enough to truly learn something important.
The character is just some standard character. Nice to his family and friends, naive and an idiot and genius at the same time. He majored in engeneering I guess but discusses with his ai how to run an enterprise out of nothing. While he does have a better brain the knowledge just appeared.
Few trustworthy friends, family and employees around him.
The world background seems to be normal world around 2013.
It's readable but at some point it gets boring as only side characters are mentioned. Mc doing a random task like stealing knowledge.
So final evaluation : the Mc is stupid and naive despite having a far better brain.
Author writes too much useless stuff like those explanations and mentions those side characters too often.
To be honest I expected more action with cyborgs or Hacking.
Writing a review is the hardest part for me.
I would rather do scripting than do a review here. Nonetheless, for my book.
Hey, I don't know who started this culture here in Web Novel. But, it's becoming quite trending here. Almost everyone did it as some kind of necessity to write their review. I don't like it, though.
So this is my first and last shameless review of the book.
Well well, I'll try my hardest to entertain my readers who entail for this book.
Alright, give it a try and delve into this fabulous surrealism world of the_handsome_fatty or just Joey.
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FL finance will betray with her sister then meet a driver and get married for immediate cure (from her sister plot) after using ML she will fly to overseas become pregnant and come back to look for driver ML (as her child want dad)
pretty much after solving all misunderstanding and face slapping they will live happily with their child
I still don't understand why she would run away tho.
she would have just told the ML when she was pregnant and had a happy family.
forgot to mention ML is not driver but a big business man only our FL will misunderstand as driver
Writing: Yeah, I can see why some people dislike it. The writing at the beginning does justify the negative reviews. I personally didn't mind it as much since I (slowly) skimmed through it. It got better for the later chapters and I can see the author's effort to improve. Regardless, the writing is nothing stellar but not horrible either (for the later parts that is). The use of onomatopoeias is pretty excessive for my liking personally but I understand the author's intention for the tone of the novel to be much more casual. After some amount of re-reading, it certainly has somewhat grown on me.
Plot: I think the story is fantastic. It doesn't have a strong start (after the main character got the system). I did not enjoy the school setting very much, but that's just my personal taste. However, things get increasingly more enjoyable as the story advances further. I really like the psychological mind games between the protagonist and the antagonists here, albeit sometimes it gets slightly dragged out a bit. Also, I would love to see some hints or appearances of the werewolf who killed his parents since it was the main antagonist after all.
Characters: The main character is the reason why I'm in love with this novel. Sure, he's certainly not the brightest sometimes, but I love everything else about him. Unlike most MCs I came across, he's not some ordinary high school twink who suddenly found supernatural powers. Even before the appearance of the system, the dude was an absolute menace, being in the military force against supernaturals as a normal human. He's very cunning and ruthless, which is extremely fitting for a werewolf. Other than the MC, the females are quite lacking. Harem is not my cup of tea so I'm glad that this one is not too overbearing.
World building: The setting is pretty good. The world building is not heavy as it adds bits and pieces as the story goes on through the MC's missions. I really like the war-like atmosphere with a magi-tech world.
Overall, while it is not the best, it is certainly very enjoyable. I am currently and will continue to purchase privileged chapters and support the author.
PS: If you are dissapointed with this novel, I HIGHLY suggest "The Harvester"
The beginning of the story was nice to read and had some mystery to it because of the magic.
But now it's about politics and side characters. The Mc doesn't use all his resources efficiently despite having an ai, like using his money or threatening the government with Gaia os.
The writing style is OK but in some chapters very boring as it's only an explanation of how he builds or creates things. Dunno if the author just wants to flex his knowledge or just waste our time as it doesn't have any relevance to the story itself and it's not in depth enough to truly learn something important.
The character is just some standard character. Nice to his family and friends, naive and an idiot and genius at the same time. He majored in engeneering I guess but discusses with his ai how to run an enterprise out of nothing. While he does have a better brain the knowledge just appeared.
Few trustworthy friends, family and employees around him.
The world background seems to be normal world around 2013.
It's readable but at some point it gets boring as only side characters are mentioned. Mc doing a random task like stealing knowledge.
So final evaluation : the Mc is stupid and naive despite having a far better brain.
Author writes too much useless stuff like those explanations and mentions those side characters too often.
To be honest I expected more action with cyborgs or Hacking.
I would rather do scripting than do a review here. Nonetheless, for my book.
Hey, I don't know who started this culture here in Web Novel. But, it's becoming quite trending here. Almost everyone did it as some kind of necessity to write their review. I don't like it, though.
So this is my first and last shameless review of the book.
Well well, I'll try my hardest to entertain my readers who entail for this book.
Alright, give it a try and delve into this fabulous surrealism world of the_handsome_fatty or just Joey.