I really loved this book but the ending was not satisfying at all. I absolutely HATE how it ended. You left no room for redemption at all. I am devastated how it ended. I kept holding out hope for real forgiveness and a chance for him to redeem himself but I was so let down I want to cry.

This is a different take on witches. And for once, the sacrifice isn't female lol. The writing is good though there r some sentences tht r too long. But, overall it is easy to understand. The plot itself is already intriguing from the synopsis. The king himself failed to follow the tradition. I'm quite curious if there would be a curse befalling the prince. On another note, the world building is superb. I love the bg narration and the naming sounds realistic for some reason.

Keep up the good work, Author! Good luck!

THERE ARE SOME SPOILERS.

Nothing major just about how the mc acts and some reasons explaining the points of why I am wanting to drop. (Hopefully the author can clear some of it up?)

The two major problems for me that stand out above everything else, that is making me want to drop are, When does he stop becoming a slave to his "uncle"? I just cbf to waste any more time on this if doesn't stop soon. I mean he should already have his doubts about him already.

From all his supposed intelligence the mc was shown to have during the earlier chapters, it's baffling how he doesn't have some doubts. His town was supposedly killed by beasts but he is magically the only one still alive? He doesn't remember anything but when he does or tries to it is painful?

He should have had his doubts in his "uncle" considering these facts but still believe in him considering all the time they spent together. However, it should have become frighteningly clear that something is wrong after speaking to Lan.

Let's not forget what he called the uncle and even hinted at why. But the most important thing is he learnt about the soul/mental technique. He can make someone kill themselves, take their memories etc. This should have made it glaringly obvious and confirmed his doubts about something about his uncle is wrong. He should know that if he can do it, what is stopping an even stronger person doing it to him? Or is he so fcking arrogant to ignore this?

He should have realised that his supposed memory loss is because of a soul/mental technique. Then adding on all the other clues he has been given then he should rly be starting to doubt his "uncle" and start realising some of the truth...

However, it's like let's just ignore all that and keep the mc as a dog/slave/pet of the uncle. Make the mc seeth with rage everyone says something to discredit his master and be a good little pet and make him proud...

I honestly can't stand it and rly want the author to just get on with it. The whole memory, adding on with all these clues should have acc lead to something.

Another thing is the whole rage thing... I liked his other personality better. Where he didn't care about what others thought. Ignored them and only went after people who are directly after him. Now lately it's just been the mc acting like a fcking madman for no reason.

I'm guessing it's because of the scripture or his special body that is giving him the rage. It was mentioned it was half the rage and the other half was him the calm side so maybe he has a beast side?

However, how long does this last, when or does he reach a balance? I don't want to read about a psychopath madman that just wants to kill everything... compared to his first personality its a difference between night and day.

I dunno just cbf to read about an mc losing control constantly going on a rampage every time he fights... plus it always starts or ends with the mc always smiling EVERY SINGLE TIME. Like we get it he is crazy. Do you have to mention the smile that everyone notices but him every time he fights or about to battle??

But yeah, prefer the mc having some intelligence like it was made out he had but in reality, he doesn't...

Yeah, anyway gl to Author

This is a must read! [img=recommend][img=recommend] The novel is well written, and have a great and detailed world background.. even though it's a little dark for me, it's very intriguing how the characters on the novel works. There are witches and furthermore, the unhesitatingly sacrifices... the appropriate mood and tone is also there which makes it more exciting for me. Great job well done, Author! [img=recommend][img=recommend] Your novel will stay in my collection, and I will definitely read your upcoming chapters in my free time. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

The story is interesting. The writing style of the author is  very good. she crafted well. It can hold interest of the reader. However, the opening of chapters is not reader-friendly. The conditions can get in the nerves.

Man originally I felt bad for dong lin’s impending heartbreak, but then he revealed that his Grand Romantic Gesture was to bring lu tong in as a concubine. I thought, “oh right. he’s Rich People. of course he wouldn’t see anything improper or demeaning about bringing his life savior and benefactor in through the side door to be a concubine. silly me”