On chapter 4519 and took a break for a couple months cause I'm getting burnt out on how long everything in this novel drags on. Came back and still feel like it's just dragging. Can't get back into it at all. At some point your just doing to much and adding to much and it gets just annoying. I think I'm gonna drop this one. Loved it for a long time but man it's just dragging.

THERE ARE SOME SPOILERS.

Nothing major just about how the mc acts and some reasons explaining the points of why I am wanting to drop. (Hopefully the author can clear some of it up?)

The two major problems for me that stand out above everything else, that is making me want to drop are, When does he stop becoming a slave to his "uncle"? I just cbf to waste any more time on this if doesn't stop soon. I mean he should already have his doubts about him already.

From all his supposed intelligence the mc was shown to have during the earlier chapters, it's baffling how he doesn't have some doubts. His town was supposedly killed by beasts but he is magically the only one still alive? He doesn't remember anything but when he does or tries to it is painful?

He should have had his doubts in his "uncle" considering these facts but still believe in him considering all the time they spent together. However, it should have become frighteningly clear that something is wrong after speaking to Lan.

Let's not forget what he called the uncle and even hinted at why. But the most important thing is he learnt about the soul/mental technique. He can make someone kill themselves, take their memories etc. This should have made it glaringly obvious and confirmed his doubts about something about his uncle is wrong. He should know that if he can do it, what is stopping an even stronger person doing it to him? Or is he so fcking arrogant to ignore this?

He should have realised that his supposed memory loss is because of a soul/mental technique. Then adding on all the other clues he has been given then he should rly be starting to doubt his "uncle" and start realising some of the truth...

However, it's like let's just ignore all that and keep the mc as a dog/slave/pet of the uncle. Make the mc seeth with rage everyone says something to discredit his master and be a good little pet and make him proud...

I honestly can't stand it and rly want the author to just get on with it. The whole memory, adding on with all these clues should have acc lead to something.

Another thing is the whole rage thing... I liked his other personality better. Where he didn't care about what others thought. Ignored them and only went after people who are directly after him. Now lately it's just been the mc acting like a fcking madman for no reason.

I'm guessing it's because of the scripture or his special body that is giving him the rage. It was mentioned it was half the rage and the other half was him the calm side so maybe he has a beast side?

However, how long does this last, when or does he reach a balance? I don't want to read about a psychopath madman that just wants to kill everything... compared to his first personality its a difference between night and day.

I dunno just cbf to read about an mc losing control constantly going on a rampage every time he fights... plus it always starts or ends with the mc always smiling EVERY SINGLE TIME. Like we get it he is crazy. Do you have to mention the smile that everyone notices but him every time he fights or about to battle??

But yeah, prefer the mc having some intelligence like it was made out he had but in reality, he doesn't...

Yeah, anyway gl to Author

it is very good, the only thing i would improve would be the Word proofing. they have made some mistakes  that make you think you missed some part of the story. but over all the story is pretty good.

in my opinion i believe that this is an awesome story. im currently on chapter 130 and i cant see why the ratings is on 3.8. i mean sure the grammar isnt the best but its not like you have to turn your brain off to read it. the thing it lacks most is the the commas. sometimes its pretty hard to read when theres no seperation and i had to peice some if the words tigether in my mind. anyway im only on chapter 130 and havent read the whole thing hence i cant say anything else other than how its going pretty good so far.

This book is awesome. It hasnt disappointed me at all. I cant wait to see what the author does to give the MC more powers and maybe more elements to use. But the biggest thing is that if you comment at tue end of the chapter and its relevant then the author will take ot into consideration with I think is one 9f the best things in an author because it shows they care and r trying there best to incorporate what u say to make the story better. keep up the great work!!!

'Hidden Marriage' rip-off nonsense where every would-be story arc happens in one chapter. Who cares if the original is completed? How hard is it to slap tropes on a page, and I mean a SINGLE page? If we're lucky, a whole story arc lasts almost 2 pages.

This is your typical Green Tea Bish stepmother and her White Lotus daughter plotting against the FL. Her fiance and father fall for it because men in these books have to be dumb as rocks or so OCD that they're 30 and have never touched a woman. After the set up in which the FL is - wait for it- DRUGGED, she packs her belongings into a suitcase and heads to the Civil Registration office to get married on 5/20 because all ***** women hit 18 and plan to marry any old male rag,  bone, and hank of hair so long as it's on 5/20 or Valentine's Day.

Jesus take me now. This book is so moronic. I'm  tired of even typing this review.

Our dashing ML CEO/billionaire is there to register a marriage with a wise woman who fails to show up. What's a scumbag billionaire to do? I know! How about marrying a clearly drugged 18 year old and having *** twice with said unconscious 18 year old child bride in a Bentley, with a driver in the front seat, while in a traffic jam?

This is lazy arse writing at it's  worst.

FL wakes up,  slips her dirty butt out of the car while he's  outside the car looking for a way out of the traffic jam because I guess he respects his driver too much to let the driver worry about the driving aspects of driving. Too bad he doesn't show the same decency when it comes to marrying and publicly shagging drugged 18 year olds looking to get married to anybody on the most romantic day of the year.

Please don't  be on this planet, reading this nonsense and driving and voting and having kids. If you're  reading this, you lack judgement and shouldn't be  doing any driving, voting, or breeding.

We're  on Chapter 8 or 9 now. After the FL left the ML's car backseat/honeymoon suite, she went to the airport, flew  to the US, found out she was 4 months pregnant, and it was too late to get an abortion so she didn't. One kid dies at birth and the one that lives is a hideous know-it-all, a snarky CEO trapped in a 4 year old's body because we have to have these sarcastic little monsters that make you drop the book, otherwise the author would actually have to come up with a plot and develop ***** characters who DON'T have to talk through a smarty pants kid.

Seriously, embroider your mask, create drama on social media, snip holes in the socks of the family member you're  most tired of quarantining  with, learn a language, or teach your cat to bark. Do any of these things - or none of these things -  but don't  waste your life on this book.

Translator? Epic.
Author ? Lazy AF.