A good betrayal system novel worth reading. I have seen that many are spamming with bad reviews but on the contrary it is many times better than the novels trending now. Most of the novels are cliche and this is different from them.
Also most people are saying mc should do that, do this but what you have to understand is mc is not you. Mc is a unique individual so he may make good or bad decision and thinks different than you. so dont spam author saying he should do that and this.
I hope author will continue to write this novel and your writing quality has improved as chapters increased. The reason i gave 5 stars even though it doesn't deserve it is because it is unique and different from cliche novels and has a good world building, character development
Holy Jesus! The book is so different so rare and so wonderful that I am seriously I'm awe how come I never picked it up. Well, the answer is that the no. of chapter is less than 20 maybe that's why I didn't find it before but now that I have picked it up, I really really pray that I get hundreds of chapter in a single day!
What I liked about this book is the fantasy aspect, the weird customs , the strange traditions and their beliefs... I really don't know which stories like this exist bef.
Still on the edge about reading this novel. I see some people say it's the second coming of Jesus and others on how awful it is. Some people say MC is cunning and smart, yet others say he is dense and stupid. So, let me ask, does the MC put himself into positions of trouble? Is the MC dense to female intimacy and affection? Is there any sm*t? Does the MC act like he is some 200IQ genius but actually brain dead, but plot armor goes brrrrrrr? I see people say character development is S tier, yet others say MC becomes more stupid as the plot progresses. What is your truth on these questions?
it is another cliche novel
FL finance will betray with her sister then meet a driver and get married for immediate cure (from her sister plot) after using ML she will fly to overseas become pregnant and come back to look for driver ML (as her child want dad)
pretty much after solving all misunderstanding and face slapping they will live happily with their child
I still don't understand why she would run away tho.
she would have just told the ML when she was pregnant and had a happy family.
forgot to mention ML is not driver but a big business man only our FL will misunderstand as driver
I have read the first 30 chapter and can say that it has good writing quality and stability of updates.
The story development and character design isn't really for me. While it is decent, I find it rather too generic (good guy trope) and I found his reincarnation rather useless, maybe there will be a reason for that later but for now, all I see is a somewhat obedient little boy in the MC.
He had merged with the previous soul, yet there is no fear, or worry, or even acknowledgement that he was killed. Where is the caution, he goes around worrying about his mother, yet why is that? He just came into this world and the memories doesn't seem to affect him, can you generate affection quickly for someone this quickly? If he does have memory of his life as prince then why is there no fear or even a thought about his murder. What is the reason that he wants to get strong? Is it revenge, to protect his loved ones, I still have not found a reason for him or the story. I see no tension or reason to follow the story, his sister seems far more interesting.
Usually the environment of fighting for thrones make the characters mature, yet the MC seems to lack that.
While the story seems to check most boxes I really did not get an interest in following the MC's story. His origin not really that interesting, his circumstance he seem to not care, his cheat and bloodline a bit generic. I expected more then this from Invincible Corruption Manual.
Writing Quality - 5
Stability of Updates - 5
Story Development - 3
Character Design - 3
World Background - 4
Writing a review is the hardest part for me.
I would rather do scripting than do a review here. Nonetheless, for my book.
Hey, I don't know who started this culture here in Web Novel. But, it's becoming quite trending here. Almost everyone did it as some kind of necessity to write their review. I don't like it, though.
So this is my first and last shameless review of the book.
Well well, I'll try my hardest to entertain my readers who entail for this book.
Alright, give it a try and delve into this fabulous surrealism world of the_handsome_fatty or just Joey.
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Also most people are saying mc should do that, do this but what you have to understand is mc is not you. Mc is a unique individual so he may make good or bad decision and thinks different than you. so dont spam author saying he should do that and this.
I hope author will continue to write this novel and your writing quality has improved as chapters increased. The reason i gave 5 stars even though it doesn't deserve it is because it is unique and different from cliche novels and has a good world building, character development
What I liked about this book is the fantasy aspect, the weird customs , the strange traditions and their beliefs... I really don't know which stories like this exist bef.
FL finance will betray with her sister then meet a driver and get married for immediate cure (from her sister plot) after using ML she will fly to overseas become pregnant and come back to look for driver ML (as her child want dad)
pretty much after solving all misunderstanding and face slapping they will live happily with their child
I still don't understand why she would run away tho.
she would have just told the ML when she was pregnant and had a happy family.
forgot to mention ML is not driver but a big business man only our FL will misunderstand as driver
The story development and character design isn't really for me. While it is decent, I find it rather too generic (good guy trope) and I found his reincarnation rather useless, maybe there will be a reason for that later but for now, all I see is a somewhat obedient little boy in the MC.
He had merged with the previous soul, yet there is no fear, or worry, or even acknowledgement that he was killed. Where is the caution, he goes around worrying about his mother, yet why is that? He just came into this world and the memories doesn't seem to affect him, can you generate affection quickly for someone this quickly? If he does have memory of his life as prince then why is there no fear or even a thought about his murder. What is the reason that he wants to get strong? Is it revenge, to protect his loved ones, I still have not found a reason for him or the story. I see no tension or reason to follow the story, his sister seems far more interesting.
Usually the environment of fighting for thrones make the characters mature, yet the MC seems to lack that.
While the story seems to check most boxes I really did not get an interest in following the MC's story. His origin not really that interesting, his circumstance he seem to not care, his cheat and bloodline a bit generic. I expected more then this from Invincible Corruption Manual.
Writing Quality - 5
Stability of Updates - 5
Story Development - 3
Character Design - 3
World Background - 4
The total score - 4
I would rather do scripting than do a review here. Nonetheless, for my book.
Hey, I don't know who started this culture here in Web Novel. But, it's becoming quite trending here. Almost everyone did it as some kind of necessity to write their review. I don't like it, though.
So this is my first and last shameless review of the book.
Well well, I'll try my hardest to entertain my readers who entail for this book.
Alright, give it a try and delve into this fabulous surrealism world of the_handsome_fatty or just Joey.