I just finished reading your book, and I have to say, it’s absolutely fantastic! I truly enjoyed it. I’d love to offer a few tips that might help boost the performance and visibility of your book even more. I believe these could take your work to the next level

I'll do my best to live up to this ratings. I don't mind critism or bad reviews. Without them this or any novel I writing won't be any better so let me know what you guys think

The novel is awesome. I only gave her a 4.8 because I hate frieza from DB............................................................................

Alright I guess I have to drop a review for my bro this is sooooo tiring, but I just want to do what I can to help, I highly recommend this book

Overall it's a good novel. Finally a novel where the protagonist learn earth magic. Hope the author read the novel true mage space

New up and coming writers are very fresh with their ideas. It's still in it's starting phase, with only 12 chapters, but it feels like it already has a clear plan going forward. The characters are human-like, with intense annoyance and cursing like what you'd expect from kids with a high-school background. It's also great that the the main character has a young personality and isn't too serious.It feels like it's going in a great direction, and with the promise of a female character in the synopsis, I think it'll be a great story! Hopefully it's not going to be a romance-centric story, considering the constant flowing of romance in this generation.

This novel is a nice break from fantasy and and follows a nice pacing that is easy to follow.It starts off quick, right to the action, with the story told through the eyes of the MC. The dynamics between the characters are interesting and fleshed out, with each character possessing their own personality that feels real.Great job, author!

just do it. it's taking time to finish the chapter.

This outrageous (lovingly). The first bit went hard on emotion investment now I'm hooked. I want to know the reason of the betrayal. WHAT WAS THE REASON? WHAT WAS THE REASON? [Insert what was the reason meme] That thing hooked me and the mc make me stay. I'm oficially in so deep. I'm curious what will hapoen next. I LOVE IT <3.

is he an evil MC or an anti hero for example can he kill an innocent person for his selfish gain?

I love Aria, she's a strong girl. I hope her mate will protect her from anyone who wants to harm her, rooting for her!

Unexpectedly good I like his power and how the world setting is revealed bit by bit through the his progress instead of just info dumbing i dont like how week he is now but at least he is op for his rank and will only be more op as the story goes on. Just wish the grandma witch would explain stuff more to him so he dosent end in shit situation like he is now.