Great story!! Exited for future chapters

I think the concept itself isn't noteworthy, but the execution is pretty decent so far and the writing is also solid enough.the problem i have with this novel is that the dialogue is kinda..flat. it lacks the punch, because athe uthor doesn't add subtext or description on how they feeling which will benefits it by adding more emotions.overall decent start

Author nailed at the atmosphere.System hasn't been explained yet.I felt natural part of process, adventure.From the fifth chapter onwards the novels tools off l.Expecting high tension chapters with system.

This story really took my breath away. The love that Liam and Lance share, is what fairytale are made of.Looking forward to the next chapter.

Story is getting good every single day I just love everything about the plot.🖤🤗🖤🤗🖤🤗🖤🤗🖤🤗🤗🖤🤗🖤🤗🎎🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🤗🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤🖤💫.love it love 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😊😊💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖This is so good that it has me keeping my legs close but this awesome keep up the good work.!!!!!!!!so sad!!!!😭😭😭😭😭😭I am ready for the update please don't forget about me this is a beautiful book!!!!💖💖💖🥰🥰🥰😍😍🥰💖💖😍🥰💖💖💖🤗🤗🤗

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It seems to be an interesting love story! I love such love stories in which unpredictable happenings unfold suddenly, keeping the readers firmly bound to them! Great work 👍

The writing quality is good on most parts, and the story develops at a speed one can understand. The characters to me all evil...just were did the kind people go? Even those named kind, are doing something bad in the background. Although, the Mc develops gradually, we still have to see more about the side characters.

Hi. Author here. I just want to mark my progress so far.

The first chapter of Your God Abandoned You Here sets the stage for the rest of the novel, introducing us to Mr. Edward and his dire situation. We are immediately drawn into Mr. Edward's world of darkness and confusion, as he wakes up in a strange and unfamiliar place with no memory of how he got there. The author does an excellent job of creating a sense of tension and unease, as Mr. Edward tries to make sense of his surroundings and figure out what is happening to him.Your God Abandoned You Here is a promising start to the novel. It sets the stage for the rest of the story, introduces us to the main character, and explores some of the themes that will be central to the plot. The author's use of vivid and descriptive language, as well as his ability to create a sense of tension and unease, make this chapter a compelling read. I look forward to seeing where the story goes from here and how Mr. Edward will overcome the challenges that he faces in this new world.

World Idea, great 👍 Timely Updated as well...Rest is meh... I really wanted to read it, but it gets really bad and forced as it goes further... The whole thing with his 'so-called family' was just a painful drama to read that I gave up... If I have to give a suggestion then I would say that the tone of writing in many parts of the story is straight up depressing... Yes, many parts require that sort of writing but overuse of such writing isn't the best...

Guys, you HAVE to read "Alpha Instinct"! It's like an emotional rollercoaster with swords, monsters, a protagonist who is pure suffering (but we love him, right?), and plot twists that made me scream "NOOOO!". If you like fantasy with a darker edge and a hero who gets beaten up more than bread dough, dive in! Just a warning: prepare the tissues... and the anxiety meds! 😭😂